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beatobur
beatobur
22 Sep 2007 23:47:21
Fallen Behind

Man I've forgotten to be checking your stories, this has more chapters then I remember. Anyway it's late so my opinions are a little fuzzy. One I hadn't noticed that the working title was so close the the Legacy of the Darksword stuff.

It seems to me that this at least is starting to show what shade is and what it's good for. That it really does help with combat and stuff. Mind you last time I read this story at all it was just a library getting burned. I won't critique any particulars because I'm too tired anyway.
daen
daen
23 Sep 2007 08:41:05


Yeah, the working title is really close to the Legacy of the Darksword. The story concept was quite a bit closer as well back when I first came up with it. Fortunately, though, the story idea has gone through so many changes that now it's really quite different and the only thing that remains similar is the working title.
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